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The Mountain In Between
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The Mountain In Between |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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The Mountain In Between You came to me again last night but as handsome as you were you couldn't move the wind... I know it's over now, for sure. Not for a second did I ache for your touch nor did I shake within your blue-eyed gaze- what had once empowered you spoke the words "you coward, you" as it left in evening's haze. Now it's you who's restless, longing for just one more time- but no, I just can't feel it, much too old to climb the mountain in between. |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
oh honey, i've been there before, just too tired to start the climb again. what a lovely ache this gives thank you for sharing ~*Sheli*~ |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
Yes I have been in between those moutains to and I made it over them just like you. Passing Shadows another great poem for me to adore Debo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Most excellent Dixie... Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You get stronger every day Dixie...in words and deeds  M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dixie, you really are walking your talk! You continue to grow strong and more self-empowered with each passing day ~ and write!  Lovely photo of both you and your daughter! Linda |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"you couldn't move the wind..." What a gem that line is and a sure sign it's over. Great work passing shadows. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Good for you, my friend. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 thanks so much to allyou each touch my heart |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Your not too old, you're strong enough to climb that mountain...But, Why bother venturing old mountain tops- when there are so many new ones to explore!!! Good one Miss Dixie. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweetberry  so good to see you again was wondering where you were |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dixie... The strengths you are continuing to exhibit only show us what we already knew... just know we are so danged grateful that you... found it too. Hugging you warming... K |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Aw, what a sad thing to realize in its own way. Nice write. Kristabell |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Well done, Dixie - and I mean the poem and the peace you have earned for yourself! - Owl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Dixie, you write wonderfully from the heart always, you expose your soul and free your demons, and doesn't that feel great. Much enjoyed my friend, stay well and happy. Sincerely Rick |
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