Open Poetry #38 |
Cold Land |
aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Cold Land Close your eyes and journey with me Over the mountains and over the sea To a world that is different and one you may fear Feel the cold surround you, like a burn it will sear. Open your mind and open your heart Embrace this short journey for soon we will part. You back to the world of the sun and the heat Me, back to the land where the snow and sky meet. It's cold in this land that few seem to know. The light is so brief, the sun hangs so low. Each step that you take makes a loud squeak The icy snow is dry with no moisture to speak. It's a desert, you see, of a vastly different kind But, if you open your eyes to the beauty you'll find. The lights dance like magic in the darkness of night Until late in the morning they remain in your sights. Hues of blue, pink and green with a sprinkle of gold Polar fairies live in them or so I am told. The quiet is like nothing you will ever have heard Take a look around you, and speak not a word. Whisper your thoughts watch them hang in mid air Suspended before me your thoughts are now shared. Like words in a book they are frozen in rhyme, Until they crash to the snow, perhaps lost forever in time. aziza |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A painting of words. Very nice indeed. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
i concur with chris Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done |
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Cari07 Junior Member
since 2006-06-28
Posts 33Missouri, US of A |
"Whisper your thoughts watch them hang in mid air" I love those lines. It paints a beautiful picture--as does the rest of the poem as well. |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
I love this, sounds so beautiful if it wasn't so flippin cold, I'd come visit your snowy desert .. but I'm dainty and all *grins* *huggles* ~*Sheli*~ |
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