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aziza
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0 posted 2006-07-10 05:28 AM


Thinking Thing

It's a thinking thing that makes me quiet
as I sit and think of you on this gray day.
I can close my eyes and see you, touch you,
taste you, hear your voice, and I miss you so.
It's just that thinking thing that bring these tears to me
and I can't shake the blues, just can't shake these blues.
As far as you are from me, you still seem so close
Maybe it's a heart to heart thing, like a talk.
It's a thinking thing that's all I know
because I think of you all the time and everywhere.
You just are in me now, part of me, consuming me
and I think I will love you forever, always, I think.

aziza

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2006-07-10 05:51 AM


Your "thinking" thing translate into a mighty big feeling thing for me! Very moving ~ and creatively expressed!

Love & Light,
EA

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2 posted 2006-07-10 06:42 AM


been there

smiling*

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
3 posted 2006-07-10 11:26 AM


:: smiles ::

Thank you both.  

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