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Cari07
Junior Member

since 2006-06-28

Posts 33
Missouri, US of A

0 posted 2006-07-09 01:13 PM

The winds sing softly over
Forgotten fields of fallen snow,
[ h a l l e l u j a h]
So angelic like your sweet breath
That I remember from so long ago.

Skin on skin beneath the dead oak,
While the winter world cried all around us
We held magic in our fingertips
And we both called it love.

We danced inside eachother's footprints;
We danced inside eachother's eyes.
We saw our breath become one with heaven,
Though we were both breathless deep inside.

On the coldest day that winter,
In that forgotten field of fallen snow...
I was nestled up so safe and warm inside your heart,
[ h a l l e l u j a h]
And the angels sang me home....

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

1 posted 2006-07-09 01:27 PM

I've been there, and isn't it a beautiful thing to feel so safe and warm and loved?

beautiful work, it sent a little shiver up my spine. Thank you

Sheli

The artist is nothing without the gift,
but the gift is nothing without work."
- Emile Zola (1840-1902)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-07-09 02:20 PM

Very lovely, Cari.

Thank you!

Cari07
Junior Member

since 2006-06-28

Posts 33
Missouri, US of A

3 posted 2006-07-09 02:29 PM

Thank you both. It is a very beautiful feeling.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2006-07-09 02:40 PM

Cari~

'the angels sang me home'

This phrase has been singing me~

Thank you ... enjoyed this penning~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

ApeironCalamity
Junior Member

since 2006-07-03

Posts 10
California

5 posted 2006-07-09 03:39 PM

I love poems with trees in them. To me they can convey so much. :P

That is a great feeling, isn't it? Even when the world is cold around you, that one can make everything feel warm.

------------------------
Taylor S.
"ApeironCalamity"

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2006-07-09 05:36 PM

beautiful poem!

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