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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2006-07-08 12:47 PM

FORCED CONSCIOUSNESS
January 1999

Keep awake ---
eyes burning ---
won’t open ---
light bright ---
remember ---
remember what? ---
Where was I up to? --- Oh, yes ---
Where was I up to again? ---
What was I doing? ---
What am I doing? ---
Must finish this ---
What is this? ---
Must finish it ---
Where am I up to? ---
Who am I? --
Why am I? ---
Wordsworth that he was killed ---
But he wasn’t killed ---
Who wasn’t killed?
He.
He wasn’t killed. ---
I think
therefore I yam
Yams stink
Pink yams stink ---
Yink stams ink ---
Yams think
therefore they yam ---
no, they yaa ---
Ja ---
René Descartes ---
Dey cart it away in heaps - sleep
came ---
saw ---
and conquered.

- Owl

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-07-08 02:14 PM

Oh, those moments!

and each sporatic thought
the spur of a poem.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2006-07-08 02:20 PM

Diana

I think I've been there....in fact many times. Much enjoyed the twinkle and serious of it.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-07-08 02:20 PM

Oh my...I know this well...
Much enjoyed the read Diana.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-07-08 05:29 PM

understanding this well

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2006-07-08 07:31 PM

loved getting caught
in your muse's sleep cycle
words floating
or jabbing, stabbing
streams of unconsciousness
giving you fits
and bits and pieces

leaving you with loose ends to tie up
the morning after

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2006-07-09 04:27 PM

"I think
therefore I yam"

Delightful Diana and somehow so familiar... I think...

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

7 posted 2006-07-09 05:43 PM

Smiles and thanks to all of you - Karilea, Martie, Nancy, Dixie, Kacy and Kate. I am glad you all enjoyed it. I loved your responses. Yes, fighting sleep and losing - I lose to sleep faster every time!

- Owl

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