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Myself inside and out
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Myself inside and out |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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Hurt myself tonight dont want to put up anymore fights take this flask of mine drink it down one last time measure the drops to the next count down let it come let it not make a sound crawl into bed instead take a deep breath fall asleep and pray that the new day will come as i press on the sunshine will shone upon my face and the tears wash away the sorrow Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Your poem seems depressed. I hope you shake out of it and go outslide and see the wonderful sun which will brighten any bleak day. Huggs Kimberly |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know the feeling  |
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