Open Poetry #38 |
Achilles Heel |
The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Achilles Heel A deadened stare adorned the face of the victor standing tall above his prisoner muscles tensed and taunt with sweat his hardened face scarred like leather Bloodied with the soils of battle his breath went haggard as he wiped his brawl falling limply to the ground he closed his eyes and shed a tear Getting on his knees he prayed looking up to Mount Olympus Asking for Athena's light his locks of strength clinging tightly to his face drenched with mudd and icy sleet But as he got up to his feet his sandles twisted in the sand and as the waves crashed to the beach an arrow pierced his steady heel |
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Cari07 Junior Member
since 2006-06-28
Posts 33Missouri, US of A |
"But as he got up to his feet his sandles twisted in the sand and as the waves crashed to the beach an arrow pierced his steady heel" I liked this a lot. I love mythological things and the flow was perfect. Good job! |
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