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jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

0 posted 2006-07-08 11:07 PM

Awaken Sweet Imagination

Touched by the spirit of your song.

Surrounding me like fog at morning beaches horizon

Words entering my ear into my soul

Sank deep unto my hearts chambers

Changed my vision for-evermore.

Magical power from God

Of voice, Of eyes, Of music

Pierced like and arrow unto my soul.

I became hooked by knowledge of dreams

desiring for you to awaken and discover

Your accomplishments.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2006-07-09 10:28 AM

This touched me as the song of the poet.
Nicely done.
TD

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2006-07-09 10:30 AM

quote:
Touched by the spirit of your song.

Surrounding me like fog at morning beaches horizon

Beautiful visuals!

Love,
Margherita

zaz
Junior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 26

3 posted 2006-07-09 10:59 AM

yes, may we all be bit by the imagination bug.good read.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2006-07-09 11:13 AM

SweetKimberly~
This is just so very lovely~

Your muses are serving you well~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

5 posted 2006-07-09 03:41 PM

Thank you all so very much for your compliments. I have been into my creative mode and the juices are flowing. It could be the moon Marge or perhaps its the muses.

Hugs to you all Kimberly

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

6 posted 2006-07-10 02:59 AM

Your poetry is getting better and better, I really like this one.

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

7 posted 2006-07-10 03:18 AM

Thank You Songbird, I couldn't do it without the help of you and Marge. Both of you have taught me things and I have done my research.

Hugs to every one who comments it lifts the spirits of me when I am sick.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2006-07-10 03:55 AM

Very lovely, Jody....does sound inspired!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2006-07-10 05:58 AM

I was touched by the spirit of YOUR song! "Surrounding me like fog at morning beaches horizon"

"Words entering my ear and into my soul"

~ Who could resist reading on!!!

Warm hug and a smile,
EA

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

10 posted 2006-07-10 08:23 AM

Iliana, Thank you for your nice reply, I was inspired. Music hits me where I live.

Earth Angel, Glad you enjoyed also,

Warm hug

back to you.

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