Open Poetry #38 |
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Awaken Sweet Imagination |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Awaken Sweet Imagination Touched by the spirit of your song. Surrounding me like fog at morning beaches horizon Words entering my ear into my soul Sank deep unto my hearts chambers Changed my vision for-evermore. Magical power from God Of voice, Of eyes, Of music Pierced like and arrow unto my soul. I became hooked by knowledge of dreams desiring for you to awaken and discover Your accomplishments. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This touched me as the song of the poet. Nicely done. TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Beautiful visuals! Love, Margherita |
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zaz Junior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 26 |
yes, may we all be bit by the imagination bug.good read. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetKimberly~ This is just so very lovely~ Your muses are serving you well~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Thank you all so very much for your compliments. I have been into my creative mode and the juices are flowing. It could be the moon Marge or perhaps its the muses. Hugs to you all Kimberly |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Your poetry is getting better and better, I really like this one. |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Thank You Songbird, I couldn't do it without the help of you and Marge. Both of you have taught me things and I have done my research. Hugs to every one who comments it lifts the spirits of me when I am sick. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very lovely, Jody....does sound inspired! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I was touched by the spirit of YOUR song! "Surrounding me like fog at morning beaches horizon" "Words entering my ear and into my soul" ~ Who could resist reading on!!! Warm hug and a smile, EA ![]() |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Iliana, Thank you for your nice reply, I was inspired. Music hits me where I live. Earth Angel, Glad you enjoyed also, Warm hug ![]() |
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