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Resting In Jupiter's Path
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Resting In Jupiter's Path |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Resting In Jupiter’s Path Two poles tug a golden rope pulled tight As silence succumbs to muted night The harmonics of logic and passion trail off Distant, to threads of thinnest peace Unending, the pulse that cannot cease, syllable by syllable Enchanting the pines, mere shadow puppets Waving acknowledgement as if digits of gray Softly to sway, the melodic layering of still Out of sight brews sensations, quick silver the trill A prayer left unanswered and unaltered its quest Refusing extinguish in the fire child’s chest Arriving in shadow, behind builds the murmur, breathing Breathing Fasting Growing hungry for sound Moving stars all around, to slip beyond their grasp Holding tight each end of sanity, subtle moments gasp Moving on the forward ache of changing axis Solar waves that light concaves to form Resting near the feet of Jupiter by storm Copyright Kkh 7/6/06 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
wow, you had me riding Pegasus into the night skies with this one  |
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zaz Junior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 26 |
very descriptive, some of the lines have excellent word use |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Enchanting the pines, mere shadow puppets Waving acknowledgement as if digits of gray Softly to sway, the melodic layering of still" Another hit TD! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm in awe! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i felt the surge and then the calm the passion and the fire and the serenity of being quiet much enjoyed your mindflight |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Unending, the pulse that cannot cease, syllable by syllable Enchanting the pines, mere shadow puppets Waving acknowledgement as if digits of gray Softly to sway, the melodic layering of still you make this come alive with deep sensing secrets bursting open life... |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
I keep coming back to this one .. and just realized I've read it several times and never commented. I very much enjoyed the read, again and again  Thanks for sharing~*Sheli*~ |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
The beauty of your images soothe me like a song. This is really so beautiful -- thank you. aziza |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Solar waves that light concaves to form Resting near the feet of Jupiter by storm" Just WOW!  |
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