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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-07-03 03:13 AM



When It Comes To Loving


I'll take the blame.
I wasn't loving
and accepting enough.
I can recall some times
when I messed up.
I never said that
I was perfect.
When it comes to loving,
there's always room
for improvement.


JamesLee
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2006



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1 posted 2006-07-03 06:55 AM


yes there sure is James

nicely written

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2 posted 2006-07-07 04:36 PM


JamesMichael~

'When it comes to loving,
there's always room
for improvement.'


And so ... I continue rehearsing ... over and over again~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Enchantress
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3 posted 2006-07-07 04:41 PM


As we all keep trying over and over to get it right..
but when is love ever perfect?
Good write James.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

luminosity
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4 posted 2006-07-07 05:57 PM


*long deep sigh* yep, you are so right, as humans we fail, there is only one love that was perfect
LeeJ
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5 posted 2006-07-10 12:14 PM


no  one is perfect, and if one runs away due to a disagreement, then perhaps it is for the best?


Earth Angel
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6 posted 2006-07-10 03:01 PM


Yeppers! We try and try again! As the saying goes, "Practice makes perfect!"

Aloha hugs, Dear Island Man!
Linda

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7 posted 2006-07-10 03:10 PM


Love is never perfect
But if it is sincere
And warm and true and lasting,
It comes very near.  

Loving words, James.  Joye

aziza
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8 posted 2006-07-11 01:51 AM


I like how you just laid it all out. You took responsibility but it wasn't maudlin.  So good.  Thank you.

aziza

iliana
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9 posted 2006-07-11 04:07 AM


Ain't that the truth!  Good one, JamesLee.
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