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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams

0 posted 2006-07-06 09:52 PM



What is treasure if it is worthless?
I can not give you change on a penny
and like a penny on the street
most poeple don't pick it up
it just stays there to corrode

Funny how I dissapear
everything dissolves away
until my frame is as plain
as a brick on the wall


When will I find my self a little
something to at least stand up?
what is treasure if it is worthless?

-Juju

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Kielo
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since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109

1 posted 2006-07-07 12:45 PM


Wow. I know this feeling, and you've expressed it poignantly and beautifully.

(Just so you know, I've yet to meet anyone who could openly say that they doubted themselves who was not a beautiful, amazing person.)

Adam

If you would be known, and not know, vegetate in a village; If you would know, and not be known, live in a city.
  - Charles Caleb Colton

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