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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2006-07-05 07:32 AM

Almost lost
fated to drown
in its selfmade puddle,

your image saved,

siphoned
through the sun's
early morning sketch;

the storms of midnight
no longer screaming.

I touch you,

softly,
upon first glance,

the shadows
between, erased,

in the dawn
of hazel-eyed
flowers.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-05-2006 10:20 PM).]

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2006-07-05 07:34 AM

ms inky..

wondering of you on the surface
treading water
while laughing
may I throw you a life guard
to climb up onto?

enjoyed you ms

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2006-07-05 07:37 AM

This reminded me of lovers parted by sleep...
"hazel-eyed flowers". One of a kind, you are.
TD

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2006-07-05 07:38 AM

the climb
is much welcomed
may the lifeguard
pray for rain

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-07-05 10:44 AM

"I touch you,

softly,
upon first glance,

the shadows between
erased

in a dawn
of hazel-eyed
flowers."

Wonderful write Michele!
IWIHWT!
Hugs~Nancy

Don't bring me down now,
let me stay here for awhile
You know life's too short,
let me bathe here in your smile.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2006-07-05 11:19 AM

if you don't want that life guard DS offered you, may I have him?

this was amazingly beautiful

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2006-07-05 11:53 AM

outstanding

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

7 posted 2006-07-06 07:30 AM

storms can be reviving ....

thanks for the encouragement to read.

Ct

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2006-07-06 10:04 AM

Michele

Soft and romantic, this memory....lovely!!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2006-07-06 03:24 PM

SweetInkyOne~

'I touch you,

softly,
upon first glance,

the shadows
between, erased,

in the dawn
of hazel-eyed
flowers.'

Word-thoughts to *sigh* for~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2006-07-06 05:59 PM

liked it

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

11 posted 2006-07-07 12:07 PM

"your image saved,

siphoned
through the sun's
early morning sketch;"

So strong.

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