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Open Poetry #38

ode to a red head

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-07-05 09:25 PM

Green bells line her neck they’re not for chiming
She is walking carelessly her head high
She don’t whither like seasonal flowers
All on her head is a fiery red
She walks to the tune of the afterwards
And sings the songs of passion and sadness
She speaks humble always say for herself
She walks with the side-to-side shuffle hips
She’s got tender eyes when looking at me
And she leaves my presence with awkward stares
She is the girl that few will ever have
And she is a girl few can even see
So fire does burn within hearts of men
So fire red heats mans passionate den

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-07-05 10:20 PM

grinning here

listening to
third eye blind
semi-charmed life,
reading your post at the same time

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2006-07-05 11:23 PM

hey
youre kinda cute
and write nice too
you got an online girlfriend?

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

3 posted 2006-07-06 02:23 AM

lol, to be honest i dont. thanks for the comments and complaments ladys.

I am the two-toed wanderer

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

4 posted 2006-07-06 11:39 PM

Great write.. I really love how you explain things through poetry.. keep it up..

~Heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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