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Open Poetry #38
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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
0 posted 2006-07-02 12:48 PM

realm in the middle of the rain
glow of a lonely ten-finger ocean
retrospectively different

neverland in crystal synchrony
eye-locked beauty
calming life to the speed of perfection.

correction.

incoherence of scars
framed in solid effigy
is
to persist.
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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-07-02 07:35 PM

not sure of your intent here,
but I read in this,
the scars of the past
bulging themselves
onto today's
reality
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2006-07-07 01:13 AM

I'm still feeling a connection with the ancients, something from the past in this. Though perhaps, its about two souls who've been unable to close the space between them?
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