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howardtsu
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0 posted 2006-07-05 05:57 PM



                                      to my sorrow

i may never be able to borrow

                                     her pen again

and she may never have the desire to write me as a friend

but as long as Haagen Daas makes ice cream i'll never have to tire of wishing for her to refresh me with her cool July wind

                                   when i'm lonely



                                                                             love,

                                                                             howard



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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-07-05 11:41 PM


lol
better hope
that's a forever ice cream dream

JL
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2 posted 2006-07-06 12:05 PM




Good one!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-07-06 12:18 PM


I like this one

I do read yours but hardly ever leave a comment but on this one, I had to

Kielo
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4 posted 2006-07-07 12:52 PM


I really like this. Thank you.

Adam

If you would be known, and not know, vegetate in a village; If you would know, and not be known, live in a city.
  - Charles Caleb Colton

howardtsu
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5 posted 2006-07-07 04:12 PM


thanks guys  
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