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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

0 posted 2006-07-05 12:42 PM

Phases

I often go back to the old places
where my footprints have long been washed away-
from times I knew and forgot the faces
remnants and ashes of a yesterday.

And if someone were to tell me it was all a dream I made
if I did not go back, I just might believe-
the mind plays tricks, memories will fade
time gone past, difficult to conceive.

And somewhere in a time not yet known or seen
it will be this very moment I'll be returning to-
tomorrow takes now and dissolves it to dream
today just passed away
and no one even knew.

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

1 posted 2006-07-05 12:52 PM

Dixie,

I love the new picture and I really liked your expressed meditations here.

God bless you both.

-Bob

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-07-05 12:58 PM

hmmmm, your dead on, made me ponder the many days, I spent feeling so badly b/c of the losses, now only realizing, how utterly foolish I was to hang on, and not simply look for the good in everything lost...

hugs to ya for this not only awakening right, but also very well composed.

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

3 posted 2006-07-05 01:19 PM

::smiles:: Beautiful ! So well done!

Another keeper for my "shadows" folder.
:: bows :: Thank you. ((( Dixie )))

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-07-05 01:55 PM

"today just passed away
and no one even knew."

How true this write is Dixie.
Most excellent indeed.
Hugs~Nancy

Don't bring me down now,
let me stay here for awhile
You know life's too short,
let me bathe here in your smile.

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

5 posted 2006-07-05 08:54 PM

Those are the two lines I liked best too

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2006-07-06 12:33 PM

"today just passed away
and no one even knew."

Love this write!!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2006-07-06 09:37 AM

JL quoted my favorite part.....hit me with the feeling of a sad truth. Such a well done poem!!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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8 posted 2006-07-06 10:10 AM

DixieDoodleGal~

'And somewhere in a time not yet known or seen
it will be this very moment I'll be returning to-
tomorrow takes now and dissolves it to dream
today just passed away
and no one even knew.'

*sigh* .... too quickly it is gone and only in the mourning do we realize the loss~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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