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marcel
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0 posted 2006-07-05 03:29 AM



The Little Things…

It’s the little things you do so much better than the rest,
A suture that heals past wounds committed by others
When I trusted more, only to be loved less
Expecting actions and reactions to my own expectations
Only to receive dissatisfaction and selfish satisfaction,
Benefiting neither the rose that blooms for the next day
Or the lonely heart being embraced by a deceitful lover…
But it is the little things you do so much better than the rest
That has me looking forward to sharing a future of happiness,
With a wonderful woman who loves me for me.

Marcel


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iliana
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1 posted 2006-07-05 07:11 AM


Very sweet poem, Marcel!
ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2006-07-05 07:34 AM


Great Optimism in this little write.
Uplifting.  
TD

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3 posted 2006-07-05 12:03 PM



LeeJ
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4 posted 2006-07-05 12:24 PM


I remember all of what you described here so well, and wishing you the best...yanno, it always works out for the best

wonderful writing

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