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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2006-07-05 12:13 PM


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the dawn challenges

without remorse or favor

breath is never free
sullen rising dawn

horizon glowering dark

sad awakening


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-07-05 12:22 PM


exactly
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-07-05 02:08 AM


now that is sad

maybe because I feel it in my own way now

iliana
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3 posted 2006-07-05 02:13 AM


Understanding, all too well...
Martie
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4 posted 2006-07-05 10:21 AM


"Breath is never free"

I am more aware now of every breath I take.  

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2006-07-05 11:30 AM


it keeps the hair outta my face too.

turning toward the wind, I mean.

And why did this remind me of the oracle at Delphi?

LeeJ
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6 posted 2006-07-05 11:34 AM




another one of life's stories, which makes us who we are...the brilliance is in the blending of our soul

wish so, I could write like this....


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