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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2006-07-04 12:59 PM



Shame shines in her eyes
Touch me he tells her
like this and like this
Don't tell your mother
don'ttelldon'ttelldon'ttell
This is special
just you and me baby
this is how big people love
like this
like this
like this
don'ttelldon'ttelldon'ttell
tears on her face
hand over her mouth
I love you
I love you
I love you
DON'T.
TELL.
DON'T.
TELL.
DON'T.
TELL.

She turns her dollies faces to the wall
so they can't see
they can't tell
they can't accuse her
with their eyes.
So they can't tell.
Her teddy under the bed
lost to her now
because big girls dont (don'ttelldon'ttelldon'ttell)
need such things anymore.

Shame shines in her eyes.

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1 posted 2006-07-04 01:35 AM


this is so sad
latearrival
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2 posted 2006-07-04 01:57 AM


More than shame, on him not the girl. She is innocent. Hugs. martyjo
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3 posted 2006-07-04 09:37 AM


OhPaula~
This is so real to far too many~
This hurts ... aches ...~
And whether we realize it or not, the ache lasts a lifetime~

We do need to teach the little ones that 'don't tell' is a red flag that tells them that the secret needs to be told immediately~

I'm not allowed to type in what I really feel about the monsters-of-the-night ... but know that right now my mind is whirling with some mighty naughty words that would never pass the filters.

We have to listen to the children ...~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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4 posted 2006-07-04 10:16 AM


Unfortunately this is way to true and wayyyyy to many people will be able to relate.  

Good, but sad write.

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