Open Poetry #38 |
...Purple Popsicle... |
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Popsicle in its blue and white wrapper I crack its core against the brick corner raise it up for inspection for the fairness of the break you choose first your half may be slightly bigger my little sister this is our communion romping with purple tinged tongues all the way home. . |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
How lovely to have a beloved sister with whom to share a purple popsickle.I remember one for you and one for me days with my sister. Love, Joyce |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
this is sooo cute and so well done - loved it Nancy |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You know nancy, I read your poems about you and your sister, and wish that my sister had wanted to be close to me. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You made me remember how my older brother would share with me. He always took care of me and looked out for me. Thank you for this lovely gift. aziza |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Aw, so sweet. Summer time, what wonderful events it brings. Kristabell "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"this is our communion romping with purple tinged tongues all the way home" Tears here Nancy. Popsicles... two of my younger sisters are gone but I have one left. I am going to buy her a purple popsicle. Thank you. Kate BTW... the picture is so you! |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
lfe is about such little important things as this arthur |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AwNance~ I just look at that photo and say, "Awwww"~ How very precious the two of you~ I remember so well the 'purple popsicles' of my youth~ This is just .... awwwww~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
This brings back memories Tinker. I was pretty good at using brick corners to split the goods. I loved the grape flavour too. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~Thank you all for your replies... enjoy your time in this heat wave and don't forget the sunscreen!~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
One more time. Got my sun screen. Want to share a purple popsicle with me?? I'll let you choose. believe in what your heart feels... |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
This is such a great piece. I have 4 sisters that I would love to share a popsicle with..but alas they are far away. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
So nice to see you....I remember my younger brother and I eating popsicles when we were little. Cute picture.....and I love the poem. Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And such is gracious love |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Cute picture, and I sure can identify with the poem and the breaking of popsickles between sisters! Iliana and I shared a lot of popsickles growing up, too! A nice remembrance this is! misce |
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deasomnians Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 87California |
Thanks for the adorable image. Though I'm just a bit too old for popsickles, this makes me grateful I have a younger brother I can still share other things with. "Nature has implanted in our minds an insatiable longing to seek the truth" - CJCL Convention Theme 2005 |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Such sweet memories....aren't they even better than the actual popsicle? sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Potatobunny Junior Member
since 2006-07-17
Posts 14 |
I loved the poem and there is no advice I could give you to change it because I loved the whole thing! By the way, I'm new here and to writing poetry so I'd love it if you would critique some of my work. -Potatobunny |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You just gave me the taste of summer. *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
smiling...naught that I remember, but I saw pictures (wink) wonderful memories you send |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Such simple dilemmas are the hallmarks of childhood. Well done. Hugs, Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww ..... Nancy Lee, I am so glad that I found this before heading back out to the campground. What wonderful childhood memories this has brought forth. We are certainly blessed to still have each other .... and purple popsicle smiles. Although, I do recall a time when in order to stop my ice cream cone from dripping, you magically made most of it disappear!! I love you and miss you. hugs, Chris |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
sweet memory...thanks for sharing. Brought back mine too. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I remember those days and popsicles.... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How happy this read made me Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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