. . . Love's triumphant return

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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2006-07-03 03:48 PM

from whence this good thought
naught but negative has passed
until you strode by
shining light in dark places
warming me with your sweetness

shining sol on me
lifting my downcast spirits
softly reminding
gently prodding love awake
rekindling cooling embers

you are prescribing
I am the patient anon
relearning patience
remembering love's promise
and her trimphant return

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2006-07-03 04:45 PM

Outstanding write!
Very much enjoyed.
TD

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2006-07-03 05:06 PM

I've been a patient patient, too

it's so dang good to read you
just the Rx I needed today

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-07-03 05:29 PM

YAY!!! The Love Doctor is in!!
And a wonderful entrance he makes..
standing tall in the doorway...
WHOOOHOO!
Come On In!

Don't bring me down now,
let me stay here for awhile
You know life's too short,
let me bathe here in your smile.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2006-07-03 05:38 PM

I liked this. Well done.

"My soul is adrift in oceans of madness
Repairing the rift that you have created"~ Disturbed

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2006-07-03 07:59 PM

Enjoyed...James

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2006-07-03 09:22 PM

welcome home honey i have missed you

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2006-07-04 09:15 AM

Aha...

and he is back!

Welcome home, Sir!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2006-07-04 10:55 AM

I'm glad you're back!! Enjoyed this so much.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

9 posted 2006-07-04 11:29 AM

If only she would . . .

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

10 posted 2006-07-04 12:00 PM

Happy Independence day to you all!
Thanx for stopping by

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

11 posted 2006-07-04 02:51 PM

Happy 4th to one of my all-time favourite American gentlemen !!!
Wonderful write as always.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2006-07-05 06:13 AM

relearning patience
remembering love's promise
and her trimphant return

lovely writing

M

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

13 posted 2006-07-05 11:32 AM

absolutely beautiful

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

14 posted 2006-07-05 11:50 AM

welcome back

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