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JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA

0 posted 2006-07-03 01:59 AM


The Color of Your Eyes

Green is the color blue and yellow.
As a sunset at the shore
on a warm tropical night by a fire -
Radiant, as a blue and yellow sapphire.

Green is fluorescent of the sea
guiding my thoughts of you
tempting secretes and
conducting symphonies of blue.

Yellow and blue are a sunrise
silently harboring the green tide
between horizon and sand dune,
whispering songs through rippling salt grass

Green is the color of captivating,
enticing, and
natures alluring disguise.
Yet preferred of all,
it’s
The color of your eyes…

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Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2006-07-03 03:15 AM


Nice...James
passing shadows
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2 posted 2006-07-03 06:34 AM


this is gorgeous!
Sunshine
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3 posted 2006-07-03 07:07 AM



Sigh...

I'm afraid I would have to agree...

I do so enjoy the color green,
in all its many hues!




ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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4 posted 2006-07-04 12:22 PM


A pure rendering...life is green...
love is life.
Pretty eyes you view, JL.

latearrival
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5 posted 2006-07-04 12:30 PM


Very pretty.  And all those wasted years I wished for blue violet eyes to go with my  very dark brown hair!  late Arrival
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