Open Poetry #38 |
A World Of Darkness |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A World Of DarknessPeople often tell me |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuzieQ~ Your PiP friends have been here (and are STILL here) for you through all of your good times and the not-so-good ones~ Loving you ... unconditionally~ Pen the pain sweet lady ... but believe us ... it WILL get better~ Honest Injun !!! Hoping you are all set up now in your new place and enjoying it~ Love you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Poetic Concept Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 66God's Fingerprint |
I dont really like the "day" "Gray" rhymes scheme because u used it twice in about five to six stanzas, most of your stanzas rhyme scheme was too choppy, the thing I did like however was the emotion, your ability to write about how u feel makes u a good poet sometimes u may not be able to find the right words to express yourself but I hope u dont let that discourage u to write, maybe someone will give u the word u r looking for by simply responding to your poem...anyways good luck not onlyin writing but life "How vain it is to sit down and write when u have not stood up to live" |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I've always wanted to rhyme... but it just never works for me! Muchly enjoyed. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Not true but I love the emotion. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Hey Smart Chick. Understanding how you feel about some people. But as others here have said, we are here. Just too far to drop in. Consider this a drop in. Make a cup of tea, put an extra cup out for me and let's put our feet up and we will have a gab fest.Good luck. martyjo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Sue, you know I'm always here as a friend whenever you need, just like you are there for me. I am so glad I know you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's a helpless feeling, struggling along for yourself and family when you have friends that could use an extra hand, too... but you portrayed what it is to continue..and to not give up. Well done, Sue! |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I know this feeling well, Sue...I've been there many times.....hugs to you!!! sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge I know! And, I thank you so much. I am patiently waiting for things to get better. Well, sometimes, not so patient. But, I am ready for more "Good Times". I have had more than enough of the "Not-So-Good" ones. rosepetals25 I'm glad you enjoyed reading my heartfelt poem. Thank you! Seymour Tabin I know! As I was writing this, I was thinking of someone, who claimed to be a friend. But, because things had turned bad, once again, she left. Thank you for all your support, Seymour. It is truly appreciated. And, thank you for your delightful poems. Martyjo I have your cup of tea, ready and waiting. Looking forward to your visit. Dixie I know. Thank you, my friend. Sunshine Thank you, so much for your kind comment. I guess, I am just too stubborn to give up. Although, there are those times, when I feel like it is just a waste of time to try. Even then, I can't seem to give up. skyshine Thank you for taking time to read and leave a reply. I am sorry you have experienced this, too. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuzieQ~ Handled like a trooper kiddo~ Continue to write it and share it ... for those of us who know and love you ... TRULY CARE~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue...Things will get better. Friendship is a gift and with these words I give you my friendship. Take Care...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I bet you just felt that little kiss on your cheek??? Must be the one I blew over to you a minute ago Sue. I know, no one understands loneliness unless they've experienced it. You should have a little cat around the house who only talks love to you and you can tell her/him all your secrets, knowing she/he won't gossip them around. But for now, warm hugs to you my friend And I love your new photo Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge Thank you, Marge! If it wasn't for you, and other people like you here at Pip, I wouldn't haven't gotten as far as I have. Paul Thank you, Paul, for your friendship. To have another friend is always a treasure. Titia I thought I felt something on my cheek. Some days being alone doesn't bother me. Other days, it is just so hard. I had a cat, who really listened to me. LOL! But, the bad thing is, he got so sick with an incurable disease, and was so bad off, that he had to be put to sleep. It just broke my heart. But, I still have 2 of my dogs. How is my little SmartChick doing? |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Yes, it's hard to be alone, then again there are worse situations. A 45 year old gal I know has a speach impediment and forges on alone. She has an ugly part time job, although she's capable of much better. I'm sure it's all due to the speach thing. She cared for her mom until she died. Little does she know what an inspiration she is! From what I read, you certainly are, too. Anyone who manages moving by themshelves, deserves a medal! Rae |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Sue.. C'mere Don't bring me down now, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sandgrain Thank you for your kind comment. Nancy Thank you, my friend. I hope you are doing well. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
We love you Sue and only want the best for you. Be well and try to smile my friend. hugs, Chris p.s. luv the new pic!! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww, thank you, Chris. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sue, I know the feelings all too well and like you, the friends on here have made life a bit easier just knowing they know and understand... and whether you use any rhyming scheme more than once or whatever..that is your choice...sometimes the repetition makes the effect you want. and sorry I wasn't here but was away for 4 days... M |
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