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Open Poetry #38

An Easy Rebound

howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2006-07-01 04:42 PM

                      it's been too long

                  since  your love songs

have played into the soul of my blueberry muffins

and the thought of some other guy stuffin'

himself silly with doses of your affection and laughter

has me wishing you were only bluffin'

when you told me i couldn't be your Toronto Raptor

                              anymore

                                                      love,

                                                      howard

Poetic Concept
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since 2006-06-25

Posts 66
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1 posted 2006-07-01 06:33 PM

                      it's been too long

                  since  your love songs

have played into the soul of my blueberry muffins

and the thought of some other guy stuffin'

himself silly with doses of your affection and laughter

has me wishing you were only bluffin'

when you told me i couldn't be your Toronto Raptor

                              anymore

"Toronto Raptor", I dont really see where that fits in with this poem but before that I like this soooo good job...elevation is the key

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