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shirtless
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0 posted 2006-06-30 02:03 PM



pointless sacrifice --
as he was placed in the tomb
serpents climbed the cross

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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-06-30 02:20 PM


I am never ever disappointed when I click on your name.
Very touching write.
Most excellent Sir.

Hugs from southern Ontario, Nancy~

Don't bring me down now,
let me stay here for awhile
You know life's too short,
let me bathe here in your smile.

jellybeans
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2 posted 2006-06-30 03:02 PM


only because they wished they could ascend as did He...powerful write, though IMO it was a sacrifice as far from pointless as you can get
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-06-30 05:06 PM


just curious...why the brackets around your titles lately?
shirtless
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4 posted 2006-06-30 08:25 PM


Square brackets are one way to indicate that a poem has no title and is being referred to by its first line. / indicates the end of a line if the reference goes beyond the first line.

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passing shadows
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5 posted 2006-07-01 07:33 AM


oh neat

thanks...learn somethin new everyday

Honeybee
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Ontario, CANADA
6 posted 2006-07-01 09:00 PM



Damn!

Sad and powerful senryu...You master EVERY poetic style ten fold and leave me wanting to borrow your muse

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

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7 posted 2006-07-01 10:00 PM


Chilling....


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