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Abe
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0 posted 2006-06-29 03:04 PM



THE LAND OF THE FREE

On Independence Day this year
We’ll wave our Flag, salute and cheer
We’ll thank all those who’ve gone before
And those today, we send to War.

We’ll think about what Freedom’s cost
Those who fought and those we lost
We’ll stand tall and proud and say,
“I’m glad I’m from the USA!”

Since it was signed in Seventy-six
There’s some who’ve tried some dirty tricks
To change they way those words are read
To change it to their way, instead.

It has withstood the test of time
Protected Rights of yours and mine
It checks and balances those things
Heard when the sound of Freedom rings.

But hear me loud and hear me clear
There are still those we need to fear
Who would take those Rights away
Little by little and day by day.

Don’t let anyone try to change
The way we live or rearrange
The American way of life we know
Born, two hundred thirty years ago.

For, once it starts to slip away
There’ll be no Independence Day
And too late we’ll look and see
We’re not “The Land of the Free!”

06-29-2006


Del "Abe" Jones
Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity.


Read this and then click the link below)

The elderly parking lot attendant wasn't in a good mood! Neither was Sam Bierstock. It was around 1 a.m., and Bierstock, a Delray Beach, FL eye doctor, business consultant, corporate speaker and musician, was bone tired after appearing at an event. He pulled up in his car, and the parking attendant began to speak. "I took two bullets for this country and look what I'm doing," he said bitterly.

At first, Bierstock didn't know what to say to the World War II veteran. But he rolled down his window and told the man, "Really, from the bottom of my heart, I want to thank you."

Then the old soldier began to cry.

"That really got to me," Bierstock says.

Cut to today. Bierstock, 58, and John Melnick, 54, of Pompano Beach and a member of Bierstock's band, Dr. Sam and the Managed Care Band, have written a song inspired by that old soldier in the airport parking lot. The mournful "Before You Go" does more than salute those who fought in WWII. It encourages people to go out of their way to thank the aging warriors before they die.

"If we had lost that particular war, our whole way of life would have been shot," says Bierstock, who plays harmonica. "The WW II soldiers are now dying at the rate of about 2,000 every day. I thought we needed to thank them."

The song is striking a chord. Within four days of Bierstock placing it on the Web  , the song and accompanying photo essay have bounced around nine countries, producing tears and heartfelt thanks from veterans, their sons and daughters and grandchildren.

"It made me cry," wrote one veteran's son. Another sent an e-mail saying that only after his father consumed several glasses of wine would he discuss "the unspeakable horrors" he and other soldiers had witnessed in places such as Anzio, Iwo Jima, Bataan and Omaha Beach. "I can never thank them enough," the son wrote. "Thank you for thinking about them."

Bierstock and Melnick thought about shipping it off to a professional singer, maybe a Lee Greenwood type, but because time was running out for so many veterans, they decided it was best to release it quickly, for free, on the Web. They've sent the song to Sen. John McCain and others in Washington. Already they have been invited to perform it in Houston for a Veterans Day tribute - this after just a few days on the Web. They hope every veteran in America gets a chance to hear it.

God Bless EVERY veteran and THANK YOU to those of you veterans who may receive this !

Click the link below to hear the song and see the pictures and then share it and send it to everyone you know!:
    
go to http://www.beforeyougo.us  

some old ones

THE WWII MEMORIAL

It’s been a long time coming
And it is way overdue
This Memorial to Honor Heroes
Who died during World War II.

On the Mall in Washington
There’s a curving Wall of Stars
Marking four hundred thousand  Dead
Plus those Survivors healing scars.

Sixteen million Served
In all the Military ways
With only four million left
And most, with numbered days.

Most Americans today
Don’t know how close we came
To the tides turning against us
But for, those Battles in our name.

A Tribute we owe all Those
Who paid the Ultimate Price
And it’s  better late than never
To Honor their Supreme Sacrifice.

So many of those Veterans say
That was the last, ”Military War”
The clear danger to our Nation
Was what, They were fighting for.

Now, They will never be forgotten
Immortalized within that Stone
Gathered together in one place
So They will never be alone.


AND, PROUD TO BE

Two hundred and twenty-nine years
After we planted Freedom’s seed
After our Country’s Declaration
This World still has a great need.

Time for the Peoples of all Nations
To learn what we have always known
Since the very first and Proud day
Our Stars and Stripes were flown.

But, we can’t force Freedom on them
For if we do, it won’t be Real
It’s something that must grow on you
To change the way you Think and Feel.

We can only try to show them how
And be an Example they can follow
Stand up against those in our own Ranks
Who try to take Freedom’s we know.

We must show we have the Courage
To not let our own people take away
Any of those Rights so Guaranteed
To us, on that long past, July day.

We must Protect our Way of Life
And let the rest of the World see
That it’s something to be Proud of
When you live in a Land of the Free.

06-30-2005

INDEPENDENCE DAY

In the year of 1776
That paper was decreed -
They were tired of oppression
And wanted to be freed .

They wrote a Declaration
So the whole world would see
This was, "the home of the brave
And the land of the free".

They signed that piece of parchment
The leaders of this land
Knowing, divided they would fall
But, together they could stand.

A new world lay before them
Untamed from shore to shore -
They swore the would protect it
If it meant going to war.

Battles have been fought
And many lives have been lost -
So sad something so basic
Has such a high, high cost.  

Seems freedom is a luxury
There's some would bind us all -
Like then, together, we can stand
But divided, we will fall.

More than two hundred years
Have past by since that day
That each of us celebrate
In our own different way.

We should be proud and thankful
Pay a share of the cost -
Not take freedom for granted
For it easily could be lost.


JULY THE FOURTH, TWO THOUSAND TWO

I wonder what those folks would think
(Those, who wrote our Freedom’s Declaration)
Would they believe, those happenings
That have, forever changed our Nation.

Would they believe, some terrorists
Are, from our Country, homegrown
Spreading hate, death, and destruction
In the Homeland of their own.

Would they believe our “open door”
Has ushered in our enemy
Those who believe we’re evil
And don’t believe in Liberty.

What would they think, if they could see
Crime running rampant, in the street
Guns, drugs, and homeless people
And so many more, locked-in, retreat.

Would they believe, Freedoms treasured
Have been twisted all around
To where the criminals civil rights
Beat the victims, to the ground.

Would they believe, that businesses
Most of them, big and small
Treat their employees as the pawns
To reach, “the bottom line”, that’s all.

Would they believe, those voted to Office
Who we should trust, to guide the way
Can’t be trusted, most of the time
To live up to what, they say.

What would they think, would they rewrite
And would they take exceptance
To what we did, with what they wrote
In The Declaration Of Independence.



    



[This message has been edited by Abe (06-29-2006 03:37 PM).]

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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2006-06-29 03:13 PM


"For, once it starts to slip away
There’ll be no Independence Day
And too late we’ll look and see
We’re not “The Land of the Free!”"

True...
Great write Abe.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

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2 posted 2006-06-29 03:19 PM


Abe~
A commendable piece of patriotism for sure~

One thing is for sure
with wisdom at the forefront
we will always be
the home of the brave
the land of the free~


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2006-07-02 02:55 AM


Nice....James
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