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ChaoticHazeLight
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since 2006-06-13

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California, U.S.

0 posted 2006-06-29 03:01 PM

If only I could truly change a heart
Heaving from an omni-present soul all love into each other
To touch the mind with splashes of kindness
Like a cool wave the seeps deep into the pores
of anger
Corroding and breaking it apart
Just as
The fear of never speaking
Fades
And we become ourselves
Only
Open

© Copyright 2006 Byron Keith Landry II - All Rights Reserved

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-06-29 03:44 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
A wonderful entrance post you have chosen for us.
I'm sure you will enjoy your time here Byron.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Don't bring me down now,
let me stay here for awhile
You know life's too short,
let me bathe here in your smile.

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

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Michigan, USA

2 posted 2006-06-29 05:58 PM

Welcome to Passions.
Interesting first write.
TD

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3 posted 2006-06-29 08:11 PM

What a nice seeping wave that would be.

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just out of reach

4 posted 2006-06-29 09:10 PM

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Member Rara Avis

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In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2006-06-30 10:26 AM

Byron Welcome to passions....enjoyed your first post...

please check your email for a pip greeting

Greeneyes~

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

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6 posted 2006-06-30 10:31 AM

Welcome to PIP
a very nice read
thank you

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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7 posted 2006-07-02 05:51 PM

I enjoyed the read. Welcome!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2006-07-03 03:20 AM

Enjoyed...James

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

9 posted 2006-07-03 10:17 AM

Welcome to Passions, Byron.

Looking forward to more poems
from your heart.

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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