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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-06-28 07:17 PM

A Promise

I'll soft boil your eggs
just the way you like them.

I'll kiss your lips as
soft or hard as you wish.

I'll say yes to every word
given within a soft caress.

A promise.

JamesLee
June25
2006

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2006-06-28 07:43 PM

A lovely promise that will be surely well received by the one you have in mind ... especially when she is hungry

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-06-28 09:16 PM

lucky gal

dreamdc
Member

since 2005-11-11

Posts 54
Utah, USA

3 posted 2006-06-28 11:20 PM

I wouldn't object! I love the part about the eggs, I don't know what movie it was but something I saw a long time ago where the girl says you aren't really in love unless you know how a person likes their eggs cooked. So True!
Nice write.
Dream

FiercestCalm
Junior Member

since 2006-06-24

Posts 31
michigan

4 posted 2006-06-28 11:20 PM

oh, this is so sweet and lovely and romantic in that simple thoughtful way that truly counts. i *adore* the line about the eggs-such a small thing, but such a meaningful thing also. (so many men don't get these things...)

a lucky woman, indeed!

marcel
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

5 posted 2006-06-29 03:03 AM

Sounds like love..........

Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

6 posted 2006-06-30 01:26 AM

This sure is a very lovely Promise
Great one James

Debo

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

7 posted 2006-06-30 07:34 AM

Very cool read

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2006-06-30 06:07 PM

Way to go James!
Another good one...

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2006-06-30 07:01 PM

Thank you Margherita, passing shadows, dreamdc, Fiercest calm, marcel, Debo, rosepetals and JL for the lovely responses...this was written for someone special in my past, that used to compliment me on how delicious my soft boiled eggs were...she has a special place in my heart...James

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