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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-06-27 07:53 PM


I've Been To Amsterdam


On creamy summer days and
chocolate delightful nights.

I've seen my honey
walk away from me
until her best features
were out of sight.

I've watched heartbreak
turn into a womans right.

The part I like the least is
being alone on Saturday nights.


JamesLee
27June
2006



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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2006-06-27 10:25 PM


well now I have a craving
JL
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2 posted 2006-06-27 11:10 PM





JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2006-06-30 07:05 PM


Thank you passing shadows and JL for the nice response...James
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