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Circle Of Life " Inspired By Dixie's Poem " The World Still Revolves" |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Circle Of Life By Paul Wilson Who ever said… what goes around comes around must have been on a merry go round Orb of life has many side roads roads less taken by most for fear of getting lost within ourselves in this circle of what we call life Is it do unto others before they do unto you or treat others the way you want them to treat you Turn the cheek of red forgive over and over words of apology empty like yesterdays fish bowl we once lived in Round and round we go trying to tie the ends of our lives up all neat and tidy like last years Christmas bows Who cares what tomorrow brings when tomorrows no longer become yesterdays and tomorrow is a stale box of crackers broken and ready to be thrown away Round and round life goes a circle with no end ask me if I give a damn while I pull the cord of release that is wearing thin I free fall from your hold on me setting my sights on reality and those who care today this circle of life has stopped revolving around you ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (06-28-2006 04:21 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Paul! This is incredible writing, full of depth and wisdom. and? I needed to read something just like this today, thank you very much!  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Donna...You are quiet welcome. Thanks for reading and understanding. I hope all is well with you...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wow... some inspiration! "and tomorrow is a stale box of crackers broken and ready to be thrown away"...except I even like the crumbs when I am starving~~  M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I free fall from your hold on me setting my sights on reality and those who care today this circle of life has stopped revolving around you" Excellent write Paul..with a powerful ending. Hugs~Nancy Don't bring me down now, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: There is power in your words, dear Paul. Your inspiration brought along deep insight. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now I believe this is a poet's most wonderful compliment...to have such a piece as this written by inspiration  I am honored Paulso glad you got some feeling out of my rambling |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Maureen...I also like the broken pieces of crackers. LOL. Glad you liked this. Thanks for the reply...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Nancy...Thanks so much for taking time to read and your sweet reply. Glad you liked this...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marghertia...If you or anyone else gets just one little bit of something good from one of my poems I am more than happy. Thank you so very much for your sweet reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Dixie...All of the sweet replies to this poem should go to you since it was your poem that inspired this one. You guide me in my daily life more than you might know. I am strong because you are strong. Thanks so much for the inspire and for your tender words...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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dreamdc Member
since 2005-11-11
Posts 54Utah, USA |
I believe I am an instant fan of yours. I am just a passerby, I only come here every now and then, and I must say this poem was one of those deep breath, smile and frown at the same time, made you think but made you happy all at once kind of poems. Such truth and wisdom. Thank you for sharing it today. Danielle |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
  thank you my friend, I am so touched that I think I may be on the edge of tears (happy tears indeed) |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Turn the cheek of red forgive over and over words of apology empty like yesterdays fish bowl we once lived in" Paul, my friend, heart wrenching read. Well written, and you are a master poet in my book, sir! God Bless you! JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Danielle...I'm glad you got so much out of this poem. I would love to have you as a fan of mine. Perhaps I can return the favor. Thanks again for taking time to read and reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Dixie...Right back at ya.. ...Paul~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
JL...Thanks so much for your kind words sir. Glad you enjoyed this but I don't think I am a master poet, I really appreciate the thought though...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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