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Dragon Mistress
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0 posted 2006-06-27 12:33 PM

Broken
6/26/06

He walked away,
    - His belongings in each hand;
Her heart was in two at his heels.
He had no idea,
    - Though broken,
That he still had it.

~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~
© Copyright 2006 Tanya Weakley - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-06-27 01:15 AM

short but powerfully written
without any sentimental 'mush'
hope she puts it back in place
to be ready just in case another 'he' appears
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