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Monday Mornings |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Monday Mornings I struggle through Sunday night to find Monday And try to reconsider that promise of Friday To love myself for what the Heaven’s deemed me to see, Instead of hating myself for what I cried myself to be--- A figment of reflections through the eyes of strangers, Made more painful by the truer eyes of my soul, Who fails to see even a shadow of hero or lover, That happiness once dreamed upon me to believe… Marcel |
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Poetic Concept Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 66God's Fingerprint |
This is nice I can kind of feel what u r saying from a personal experience however, though not exactly but with the some of the imagery I get short flashes...good job keep writing elevation is the key Return the favor on Lilies and Roses "How vain it is to sit down and write when u have not stood up to live" Anonymous (Unknown) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm not replying to this poem as a favor...I really like the writing Keith good to read you hon |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I struggle through Sunday night to find Monday And try to reconsider that promise of Friday love those lines...I had/have a craft business called "Rainy Days 'n Mondays" ( partially after the song) but also because I struggle to find my Mondays too. Nicely done M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
we cannot live up to the expectations of others...what we can do is find our own world and be true to it... used to find myself feeling the same way, you've captured this with true images and great use of words.... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Compelling, the fortitude required to ride the storms of the heart, through the two-day excursion, we call..."weekend". High quality verse...provoking emotion is the goal of the poet. Welcome to Monday! Nice to read you. TD |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sometimes it seems there are too many Mondays. But you've gotta stop Monday quarterbacking the Friday plays you missed.  another really good write m'friend |
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