Open Poetry #38 |
Lip Sync |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Lip Sync What quantifies your mind, Does not qualify you lip, Centurian For my ego shall not break Upon the drool of men Nor am I clay, To form within your cryptic touch I am new Unique, the element that you pursue And though, the blush of inexperience reprise Put forth in such foreboding eyes Thy Lady’s heart cannot be broken For poetry is the soul Copyright Kkh 6/26/06 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond It reads like a Dali painting. Enjoyed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"For my ego shall not break Upon the drool of men" I have a list of things I'd like to do before I die--and a list of things I'll never do in case I don't die... and "the drool of men" is on both of 'em. *laughing* Seriously tho, this is a different style than I'm accustomed to, but I think the cut against the bias suits you beautifully. Always a pleasure m'friend. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
gotta agree with Sy...adding, terrific!!!! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you for your replies here...to this inspired write. "Elevation is everything", I have heard...and I am trying on some new clothes! Returning a grin, and a hug. Enjoying the humor in a new outlook. TD |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"For poetry is the soul" And TD you are poetry! Great write. JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is fantastic. You keep trying on those new clothes, until you find just the right fit. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Laughing at your elevation~~~ my ego shall not break Upon the drool of men Nor am I clay, To form within your cryptic touch I am ... Unique, and I love that...it is enough for me M ( don't believe everything that is written...you are high on my list) |
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