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howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2006-06-25 02:09 PM

howard :

                  but Eve, i'm still wet behind your ears

eve :

                  okay .......... but that doesn't mean we can't go out for a couple of beers

howard :

                  but what about your fears

                  of my desire to fasten your brazir

eve :

                  howard, it's been so many years

                  so let's change a few gears

                  and let our bicycles wipe away the tears

                  that were caused by well meaning peers

                  who thought we'd never enjoy ourselves at Sears

                  while watching Norm and Frasier chit chat about the psychology of filming a sitcom called Cheers

howard :

                  wow!!!  now i see why your the 3rd Musketeer

                                       i'll always adore

                                                                         love,

                                                                         eve & howard

nedj
Member

since 2006-06-23

Posts 87
Oregon USA

1 posted 2006-06-25 02:39 PM

LOL!! At first I was horrified at your (ab)use of rhyme. But as I read on, it became abundantly clear that you were going all the way over the top, and I absolutely loved it! That takes guts to do, and the faint of heart should step slowly away from the keyboard. :-) But you pulled it off with room to spare. Nicely done. The formatting and line breaks were I nice touch as well.

A poem's just a poet in a word.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2006-06-25 04:11 PM

Well done, a most witty piece...hard work,
but well worth the read.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2006-06-25 07:50 PM

Loved it!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-06-25 09:54 PM

Good stuff!!

Thanks for the smiles.
This is hard to pull off but you did.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

FiercestCalm
Junior Member

since 2006-06-24

Posts 31
michigan

5 posted 2006-06-25 11:32 PM

this is so sweetly satisfying~and it made me smile : )

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

6 posted 2006-06-26 12:30 PM

thanks guys

you guys just made my day

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