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Alone And Bare |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Where are you when rains fall and waters wash the distant shore? When castles touch the clouds of earth...before our birth of yore. Where is the tingle of flesh that touches me, that brings forth a haunting want, a wanton destiny? Where will the skies remain most clear, as starlights fall into the sea? bringing a blush to ruby lips....their touch my wish...you see. Why does the earth revolve and leave the moon in wait? Soaring ever lazily...as hunger aches to sate. So many questions that touch the night time air....whispers that remain behind....once clothed, alone and bare. [This message has been edited by Magnus (06-26-2006 04:37 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You bring tears to my eyes, Barry~~  M |
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GTP Junior Member
since 2006-06-18
Posts 35NC...USA |
we both are on the same journey my friend...I, too wonder... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love your night time whispers, dear Barry! Beneath the starlight we are more inclined to bare our soul! Love, Margherita |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww, what a sad poem, Barry. Such a tear jerky for sure. |
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Serena Junior Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 47 |
Very sad, but also a journey into the thoughts behind the life of a person. In thoughts not only is their sadness, and questions, but there is always a light of hope. Excellent poem, I enjoyed it very much. 
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Very Barry....So many questions...they are life's steps I think...though sad the way at times. Beautiful heart spill! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh*...ever your words touch the heart with a tender caress that warms the soul...Romance still blazes forth from a soul who has spent a lifetime filled with love....Magnificent, my friend...***big hugs*** |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
 Excellent! JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Don't mind telling you that I smiled each time I scrolled down and saw the title~  Oh, how the poetic mind sees~ Anyhooooooooooo, loved this penning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Barry, your the real deal excellent prose |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
How any woman could even want to leave you, is beyond my comprehension, firstly for the good person you are, secondly for your sensitivity, thirdly for your compassion, fourthly for your intelligence, fifthly for your ability to write excellent poetry, sixthly for your ability to be non-Hallmark card romantic and seventhly for your animal slippers. If you didn't write poetry to her, or if you did and didn't show it to her, then that was a huge mistake. This is an exquisite poem, superbly written, and as you see, it has you holding all of us PiP women in the palm of your hand! - Owl |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She...is between pages of blue she...wants the read of you... She...stems gardens gone stone... she...reads you, but alone... ~*~ Ok, so you inspired...what can I say!? Oh, I know just the poet that needs to read this... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
He waits beyond the garden's reach and falls before the dim of day. His quest to hear her written speech and feel the softness of her sway. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I was sure I read this before but maybe got lost in my reply inspired by such a heartfelt, moving piece, and simply forgot to put it down |
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Cari07 Junior Member
since 2006-06-28
Posts 33Missouri, US of A |
"bringing a blush to ruby lips....their touch my wish...you see." Oh this was so beautiful that it made me ache. I'd love to see some more. :-) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
BJ -- There's a Judy Collins' recording I bet you'd like called, "The Moon's a Harsh Mistress;" I think the song was originally written, maybe recorded, by Jimmy Webb. It speaks to the illusive beauty of the moon....lovely and sad, like this beautiful piece you've written. *hugs*....jo |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Sad, and thought provoking.... sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*SIGH* Don't bring me down now, |
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