Open Poetry #38 |
Summer Splash |
Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Summer Splash Warm summer sun come watch us run On sea swept salty shores And let’s have fun as we’ve begun With passion to explore Rare treasures in dark caverns lost, Old lighthouse on the hill, Bleached seashells in churned waters tossed, Winged seabirds’ caws and shrills… Warm summer rays come fill our days With joy and merriment And set ablaze our happy praise With sunny moments spent Entangled on sand mounded dunes, Exploring ship wrecked piers, Embracing ‘neath Poseidon’s moon, Imparting in one’s ear… Warm summer sky come take us high Above the atmosphere So we can spy the clouds go by And watch the fog draw near Low tide pools filled with creatures caught, Lost schooner out to bay, Proud patrons with the fish they’ve bought, The beach where children play… Warm summer wind come be our friend And fill us all with smiles So we can spend our journey’s end In optimistic style Anticipating future days, Remembering the past Warm summer sun, rays, sky, and wind Had come and gone too fast. Lighthouse Bob |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
letting out a huge sigh here* |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You sing of a favorite place of mine...now far from where I am. Yet, without the salty air, I still find so much revival in the summer sun. Great write. TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is so beautiful, dear Bob, I will keep it. Makes me really want to go to the beach right now ... feeling the freedom sun and sea provide. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lovely Writing, Bob Now if only our needed rain would stop long enough to enjoy the Summer breeze~~ M |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Bob, I love the way you pull this poem together, recapping in the ending lines. You feed my spirit today.... ~ Klassy |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Perfect beat...8/6 is always a pleasure to read...easy to work with. Enjoyed a very masterful read. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bob Yes...these are a few of my favorite things!! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
You certainly are at home beside the sea! I love the way you encapsulated so many of seashore treasures into your poem. - Owl |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bob this gave me such an uplifting feeling! Hope you had a wonderful birthday and checked out Announcements. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I loved this! Happy Birthday Bob, and thank you for never posting anything but wonderful poetry. This was no exception. |
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