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Given to Speculation
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Given to Speculation |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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Given to Speculation With twist of moment she stumbles- blind sighted, stunned by his admission- Reverse decision. Words, few in between but unforseen. And her beast breathes First, in bothersome batting of chatter To and fro - Why? Why not? How could she know? And it grows. While left cries out poignant pleas for silence, Right reckons her possibilities, which quickly make transformation- reincarnation, Given to speculation. Rounding full circle- soaring, then descending. Making its way, Stalking its prey. To feed upon her indelicacies- Simmering stew of inadequacies. Once removed from fire long ago, but robust again. How could she know? And it grows... This beast- molded in her image penned in her name With no other to blame... Defeated, She bows her head in shame- Given to speculation. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Patricia, how nice it is to read you! This is high level poetry and the incomplete evidence brings forth a powerful suspense. Love, Margherita ps I have just realized that we were on each other's poems contemporaneously ... lovingly connected! Thank you! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow! Patricia this is an awesome write. Tucking it into my library. hugs, Chris  Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is wonderful to read you again... and even better, such a powerful poem! Your muse hasn't left... she was just simmering... Well done!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Did you write this about me?  Patricia, it's good to see you posting again... and read from your ever wise 3rd eye... a very good subject to ponder.... extremely good write |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Patricia A very strong write, enjoyed. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wow excellently expressed , my mind goes to and fro asking asking why Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes it's good to read you again Patricia and I can relate to this write for sure |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such a swirl of emotions...good to see ya dear lady...you still have your touch! |
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GTP Junior Member
since 2006-06-18
Posts 35NC...USA |
a very strong presentation of what we have all felt...good job! |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
only in speculation... Nice write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Patricia, I am so pleased to see that your grade A ink did not dry up during your conspicuous absence! You haven't lost your touch! You are deep, eloquent, ~ and talented!  Sending a warm hug of love your way! Linda  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing..James |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Powerful, powerful writing! This is absolutely wonderful. I hope to see and read more of your writings. Keep up the great work!! JL |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
That was a very splendid write and I give it a standing ovation. Huggs Kimberly |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Patricia~ I've read this several times ... I find a deep melancholy steeped in the ink~ It is so very well penned~ So good to see you on these pages of blue~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wow, Patricia, this is a strong write, and very deeply expressed. So well done. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Truly, you hit the very center of the feline within. Great to see you here! TD |
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