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Open Poetry #38
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Will Rhyme
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since 2006-05-22
Posts 149
0 posted 2006-06-20 11:19 PM


Nail-heads flush driven
deep into wood:
the shiny  porch heads
reflecting the sky:


of thunder a-booming
of skyrocket scar...
deep into heaven
and us from afar!
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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
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My own little Icey Oblivion
1 posted 2006-06-21 06:46 PM

and the porch will endure, nice write

Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
2 posted 2006-06-21 08:02 PM

Cookin' a little moonshine where we???

Smiles.

Enjoyed reading.

-Bob
Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
3 posted 2006-06-24 05:49 PM

So enjoyed reading this poem.

Patricia
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