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Making Wishes
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Making Wishes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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Making Wishes Your message read: I wish things were like they used to be things change, people change, we changed, obviously. It'd be nice to be ten years back, to feel the love we used to feel. Did you find a genie in a bottle? Will wishing ever make it real? Making wishes for what's not there is for hearts and bodies that are new and my pennies for the wishing well wrapped and cashed-in to a dollar or two. I wish things were like they used to be but wishing will never make it so, it's better to fill up the piggy bank and tell the genie he's free to go. |
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GTP Junior Member
since 2006-06-18
Posts 35NC...USA |
wishing is like fantasy, always just out of reach, leaving us cold, alone, and incomplete... |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
Enjoyed! Will |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
That last verse was a real kicker. Liked it alot, Dixie. *hugs*...jo |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
another good read a poet who cares |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"but wishing will never make it so," So right, Dixie, but me - no, I'm going to wish until I die.  Enjoyed the read! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Yes I did a lot of "Wishing what used to be " knowing they will never come true Hugs Hope |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
If you really take the time to look back ten years ago...it wouldn't be what you would choose today knowing there really was no future... look ahead instead  M |
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