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Blind Love |
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Thekidfre' Junior Member
since 2005-11-19
Posts 13 |
somthing i just wrote to share where are you. its been so long I traveled though seasons and memories to find your gone A pair we were. A match only permited by the love of heaven Our bond and spirit left to vanish when the unworldly clock turned seven You breathed life into my empty soul and gave me your hand It was only fitting that I would share myself and be your man I made a promise to provide and always take care Fix you dinner when your too tired and brush your beautiful blonde hair Every inch of your body that ive fondly gottten to know Your eyes lips mind and pink peach colored toes Ive been MIA for years but some how when I with you nothings misssing The lack of light when were in the hallways kissing If i ever break your heart its because I wanted you to have mine Our future is so bright...Can you see our love shine Your taste and style is above and beyond Were be togather forever cause our love is that...strong |
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[email protected] Junior Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 17Los Angeles, CA |
Ok Ok so here's the thing Love poems can be straight foward because your talking straight to your lover. The poem was really sweet at parts and the rhymes were good but I think you could come deeper with the content. And use the title in the poem. How was your love blind. |
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