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rummed demons and fine whiskey
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rummed demons and fine whiskey |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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in the room of windows and mirrors and the blind sighted dancers when you were pale on marble and I was beside yourself riding you said the gallop was rude and that the wind was chilled but you were woman enough to master my metals for a moment if I would make the amazon leave and feed your mind the sharp teeth of another page written slowly in white ink on dark imagination our hands never touched fingers but we knew the palms of each other and the lines of our desire connected before there were words in our mouths like rummed demons and fine whiskey _______________ daark scribblenote: a little place for special meetings, down off the beaten track of the avenue, where even the stones are warm blooded |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now write of the cusp settling on midnight.  K |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
once upon a time in the land of midnight there came a tiny cusp with fuzzy feet and golden eyes and he conquored the land of midnight by drinking the ink from the sky and his belly grew large and orange til on the morrow he was the dawn ok..now what? hehe thanks lady frind |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Not only was I awed by your poem, I was awed by your poetic response to our beloved Sunshine.  EA |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lovely EA, thank you for the visit..am pleased that you enjoyed my humble pensplash |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I'm smiling nothing but lovely while shaking my head in amazement...wonderfully written D. Your a blazing light of words and heart |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms leej, you are such a gypsy of thought with your comments, I enjoy them as sipping reads, thanks lady |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you make anything sound sensual you just get better and better each time i read ya. My spirit will rise |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms g...you make me better with your eyes, thanks lady |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
You are great of pen, as well as great of person  Julie |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Whiskey, you smile me with your touch, thank you |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"our hands never touched fingers but we knew the palms of each other and the lines of our desire connected before there were words in our mouths" wow....love this part... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
It's a marvelous poem... you are generous with your fine words Stranger. |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
brava dark brother most exquisite your rummed demons and finer still your whiskey aye White Gold Wielder |
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