Open Poetry #37 |
Such A Smooth Operator |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I watch you sashay through the crowd You are the envy of all men Who will you choose tonight Amongst this bevy of women Your arrogance is unnerving And so false is your charm But that won't stop the lovelies From jostling for your arm Grinning like a Cheshire cat Who has just got the cream They don't see past your facade But I see right in between You are the centre of attention And your ego is well fed They hang off your every word By their hearts they are lead Such a smooth operator But as slippery as an eel Who will be your next victim Whose heart will you steal Self centred and insincere You're far from the perfect catch But if I'm not mistaken I think you've finally met your match I am in motion |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
LOL You are woman and I can hear you roar all the way up here in Canada! Hi, Sue! It was good to read your words again! Enjoyed this bit of a witty spin on your love poetry! Sending you a big hug, Linda |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
hell ya you go girl My spirit will rise |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I LOVE it. My type of poem. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I hope I'm not going to disappoint anyone here when I say that this was a purely fictitious write and not written from personal experience. Thank you so much for your lovely replies. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sue, this is cute, very, very cute! Much enjoyed! ....jo |
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kitvb1 Junior Member
since 2006-01-23
Posts 28Trebgast, Germany |
Loverd it, wonderful... Kit We've all been there. How we deal with it determines our paths. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Fictitious or not, it was oh-superb-o! - Owl |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Sue, ) I knew it was fictitiuos as soon as I read it. You are too in love for it to be real. This is excellent writing, just as all your work is. Hugs, Ethel |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your wonderful replies. Ethel - I knew I'd be found out by someone! :-) Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
dem fightin' words? heh heh enjoyed the read poet friend White Gold Wielder |
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