Open Poetry #37 |
Anticipating |
JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Anticipating I have your frequent flyer miles stuffed into our familiarity. It’s not reality, more to the point, it’s merely congeniality… As a new home, plastered, as in: slathered on the walls of my skull. Awaiting a final primer and glossy smoothness to undo the grayish dull. Anticipation… A graduation of sorts. Moving into winged, from cocooned. Anticipation, shivering, blistering thoughts of soon… Too soon… And yet, not soon enough. Are you willing? Anticipating? |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Anticipation… A graduation of sorts. Moving into winged, from cocooned" Well said, JL!....jo |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Anticipation, shivering, blistering thoughts of soon… Too soon… And yet, not soon enough." Powerful work. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the anticipation of something more then we now know...something very powerful, which is with us all the time...something we've known from birth...yet, with time and deception we forget...but its there, and the anticipation to know it again...is astounding... love to you JL, this was beautiful |
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wvatvrider Member
since 2006-02-04
Posts 78West Virginia,USA |
JL you led me into anticipation. I scrolled down and your words ended too soon for me. I was looking for more, and yet what you had written was just--write... Danny |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, JL! They say that anticipation is half the fun! May the arrival of that which is anticipated always deliver the other half of the fun for you! Big huggalove, EA |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thanks so much for your kind comments. I think I enjoy the replies more than my own posting. JL |
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