Open Poetry #37 |
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Lifeless... |
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weepingwillow Junior Member
since 2006-01-09
Posts 33Sin City-Las Vegas |
A tainted soul, frosted Inside the freezer of a heart grown sour Petrefied, hardened like wood No emotions can get through With simple elementary words I try,to entice you Hypnotically asking you, to show Emotions Entranced you blankly feel Mannequin in a store front window |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
The last line is very powerful |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Powerful work. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
WOW! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
excellent! ~hugs~ ![]() Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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aujussy wolf![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
so real ! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I used to be like this...many years ago...and I know a few today...James |
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weepingwillow Junior Member
since 2006-01-09
Posts 33Sin City-Las Vegas |
Thank you... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
nicely written.. yes, that last line is a good one! hugs, g "We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched." Lord Byron |
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