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Martie

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0 posted 2006-02-04 02:34 PM

She walks the city streets
falling into the doorway’s shade
then quickly moving out again
her eyes on the ground
dark and somber

She is looking for something to steal
and I fear she will take it from me
this happiness that lights my way most days
she has lost hers
and searches the windows trying to find it
without a reflection

Last night I saw her at a restaurant
moving slowly almost looking at me
and then away
knowing my interest was probing her shadow
where she thought she hid

I wanted to reach out to her
and gave her a smile like a corner table
with the chair pulled out for her
but no...came rushing towards me
as suddenly as the gust of cold wind
from the door that she closed

[This message has been edited by Martie (02-04-2006 08:56 PM).]

Ratleader

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1 posted 2006-02-04 02:42 PM

May I be the first to say Wow, it's good to see you back....all the way back. This is exquisite.

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Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-02-04 02:55 PM

OhMartieSIS~

Oh my ... I felt the movement of the door slamming~

YOU are such a wonderful poetess ...~
Thanking you always for being my devoted Sis~
I love you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-02-04 02:57 PM

OH WOW!!! Martie...this is fantastic!
I also saw her lurking just around the corner.
..waiting to take my smiles away.
Heart hugs to you and your muse who has returned!!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2006-02-04 03:31 PM

Martie
You are quite a shadow boxer, enjoyed.

Honeybunch
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South Africa

5 posted 2006-02-04 04:15 PM

Sometimes a gust of cold wind is a gift not appreciated but the shiver passes as do most things. Happiness, however, is always ours to have and to hold no matter what - once the shiver has passed, of course.
Enjoyed the read, Martie.

poetry_queen
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england,

6 posted 2006-02-04 05:03 PM

really liked this poem, please do keep up the good work
leanne x

Dark Angel
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7 posted 2006-02-04 08:37 PM

smiling....IWIHWT, magnificent Martie!

mxx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

iliana
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USA

8 posted 2006-02-04 10:03 PM

Martie, it amazes me sometimes how you are able to frame a moving picture.

...jo

The Lady
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The Southwest

9 posted 2006-02-05 12:05 PM

She certainly came to life Martie. Amazing work!

OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa

10 posted 2006-02-05 06:24 AM

Magnificent, Martie! I have felt that no, so I know.

- Owl

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

11 posted 2006-02-05 04:06 PM

This means so very much for me, this day,
sweetheart. Thank you so very, very much.

I do understand,
on all of the levels
known of loss.

Huan Yi
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Waukegan

12 posted 2006-02-05 04:09 PM

Very good,
and by the way
she'll be back . . .

John

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Realms of Light

13 posted 2006-02-05 04:25 PM

"She is looking for something to steal
and I fear she will take it from me"

~ Hang on to your happiness! Don't let anyone or anything take from you what you so richly deserve.

Words fail me when it comes to me expressing just how much I appreciate your talent!

Be happy! Stay happy!

Hugs with love,
Linda

Goodknight
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Ohio, USA

14 posted 2006-02-06 06:35 PM

your words touch me so powerfully Martie - Paul

icebox
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in the shadows

15 posted 2006-02-06 10:08 PM

Excellent writing!

Be careful where your eyes wander. Your eyes see between more lines than most.

*smile*

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

16 posted 2006-02-10 08:59 PM

Had to come back
for very special,
loving,
needs.

Thank you again
for this wisp
of wonder.

Midnitesun

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Gaia

17 posted 2006-02-10 09:39 PM

Sadness and despair...she sure hangs around in the shadows some days, doesn't she?
I felt her cold breath, am glad you knowhow to say no.

Christopher

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Purgatorial Incarceration

18 posted 2006-02-10 10:03 PM

excellent, Martie. very glad i stumbled upon this. especially loved the image of: "and gave her a smile like a corner table"

well done!

Dominique-Simone
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19 posted 2006-02-10 10:35 PM

I wanted to reach out to her
and gave her a smile like a corner table
with the chair pulled out for her
but no

Powerful Words!

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