Beginning - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

justjenn
New Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 2
Virginia

0 posted 2006-02-10 12:04 PM

The salt tastes to good
Spins me into oblivion
Saw your lips from where I stood
Chasing dreams under the sun
The butterfly left a breeze on my face
I could feel ecstacy in my blood
Your skins was leather under my lace
And the waterfall caused an enormous flood
My walls fell like the twin towers
You were a plane at high speed
And the dirt washed away with the showers
That is when I realized this was all I will ever need

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2006-02-10 02:59 PM

JustJenn

A beginning that great is bound to get even better! Welcome to Passions!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2006-02-10 04:15 PM

Welcome to PIP.

om
Junior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 31
ontario/canada

3 posted 2006-02-10 04:51 PM

Hello justjenn, just a peek in, very nice!
You're not afraid to take an ugly memory and turn it into something unique and yours, I like your nerve! very strong sense of desire in this piece I felt.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-02-10 04:55 PM

Welcome to Passions Jenn!
Excellent first post..
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

5 posted 2006-02-10 04:57 PM

Welcome to PIP, I am sure you will enjoy your time here and share much.

Sincerely
Rick

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2006-02-10 10:17 PM

"I can't imagine life without my poetry."

Neither can I, Jenn.

Welcome to Passions!

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

7 posted 2006-02-10 10:21 PM

The butterfly left a breeze on my face

What an interesting picture..enjoyed!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2006-02-10 10:35 PM

Welcome to Passions Jenn!

Enjoyed your first post.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.