Open Poetry #37 |
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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
i saw another side to you, of which i didnt know. you hurt me in ways ill never forget, and for that im letting you go. you told me things of pain, you broke my heart again. i thought you were the one for me, but our love will never be the same. you lashed out at me, told me it was the end. the tears kept rolling down my cheeks, and my heart will never mend. i thought that you were different, you were like no-one i knew but the things you said, the things you did, made me realise our love wasnt true. i hate to know our loves been lost, and we will never be the same. but no longer can i carry on, feeling all this pain. |
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jane_kiedis Junior Member
since 2006-02-04
Posts 38Philippines |
awww.. i felt it poetry_queen... i am in the very same situation ![]() better thing to do is to move on and thats what im doing now ![]() psychic spies from China tries to steal your mind's elation |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
true love AND respect is never lost though it does go through changes...just as we change with age and experience nice write M |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
i feel this poetic queen aye i do White Gold Wielder |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Remember, you are a queen! ~ and one who writes poetry with much emotion. The road to finding our true love, is often a rocky one. Each relationship that we have, helps us to define what really want ~ or don't want! ~ in a man! It is a process us that most of us have had to go through. We live ~ and hopefully learn! ~ and try not get stuck in any of the potholes along the way. Sending you a loving, understanding hug, EA |
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wvatvrider Member
since 2006-02-04
Posts 78West Virginia,USA |
it is not the women only who suffer the pangs of disappointment. It is at times very hard to go forward-but go forward we must. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Bravo. Atleast your wise enough to see the truth and move on Poetry Queen. That was a very smart (although painful) choice. Hugs Kim |
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