Open Poetry #37 |
in the garden |
steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
from the time when the first day of birth-dirt burst on opulence' scene and the moral fiber of that earth-clad corporeal being felt complete when the joinery of celestial providence melded leather with vermeil and twain walked together in a maelstrom so surreal so fell the apple, so fell they all from their malus pumila as pseudo-divines swept in the rancored wrath of hagia sophia ever excluded, ever in search of that which time has wrapped in doubted silence of its existence for which is found its path to God�again. [This message has been edited by steavenr (02-06-2006 03:30 AM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Raw beauty found here... ..."ever excluded, ever in search of that which time has wrapped in doubted silence of its existence for which is found its path to God…again." Inspiring read Steavenr. TD |
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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
wow!! really enjoyed this poem. really powerful, alot of emotion. really like it, keep up the good work leanne x |
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jane_kiedis Junior Member
since 2006-02-04
Posts 38Philippines |
what else can i say? its brilliant!!! cheers! psychic spies from China tries to steal your mind's elation |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
thank you, TD, poetry queen, and jane for reading. thank you for your kind comments..."TD, poetry queen, and jane"...doesn't that remind you of an old 60's song...oh well.... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Oh! Amazing work. |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
loved your diction friend poet White Gold Wielder |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
thank you Lady and Bagger Vance (always wondered if you were real...now, I know!) thanks for reading and commenting |
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