Open Poetry #37 |
Narrow Of Moon |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Narrow Of Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ >You tumbled >from the narrow of moon >waxing alabaster dreams >quarter-mooning >as you orbit my earth >fixating your coming phase >on shadows of this heart >half-full of expectations >when without warning >you wane from my need >for the full of you >I embark upon >the plunge of dark >awaiting the new moon pass >to once more phase into >your narrow >that sets me aglow ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
awesome marge My spirit will rise |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My dear poetess, you need neither man nor moon to make you glow! Hugs with love, EO |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent dear Marge... So very creative you are! Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Tis is great Marge |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Excellent words but I would love to read the underlying rough Dave |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Enchanting! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: You must have been a Moon Goddess in another life...........or perhaps you still are? Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I love this "moon rapture". Joyce |
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amepoesie Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 63Canada |
That's a nice piece! Good job! In any case, any new challenge to offer me? I bought poetry books the other day. Wouldn't mind getting challenged a little bit! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! This is just fantastic, Marge. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ I appreciate your replies SO MUCH on this little moon-thought~ So easily this one DID TUMBLE from that slivered crescent that spoke to me~ It penned easily and as you can well-imagine, knowing me as you all do, I just had to make the time to create the format code to allow it to curtsey the way I wanted it to~ Knowing. by your replies, that it is well-received shows me that it was worth the effort ! It's a great day to be a poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie Girl darling one, just giving you a wave, and saying this is a delight. Very pretty, and so evocative. You know I'm not up to writing the long treatise I used to do, but I simply couldn't go past this without saying its lovely as always Mushy xxxxxxxx Gray is looking after me, and making sure I don't over do things, honestly! Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarsaLove~ My day is happier just having you in it !!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Marge did that moon inspire you? You are such a good poet poetry just seems to flow out of you in such a grand manner. I loved this. Hugs Kimberly |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Much enjoyed this Marge! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh yes indeedy - Margie the moon goddess, certainly fits you well sweetie...such a delight to read as always my friend. ~hugs~ floating to the moon and back just to reach you Margie girl Love Tracie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe — W. E. Channing |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
He was indeed a thin, silvery crescent a couple of nights ago... so glad I tumbled across your Narrow... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
You ALL make me so happy to be a poetess~ Thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
back to the top My spirit will rise |
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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
really enjoyed this poem! such a wonderful write leanne x |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I liked this a lot. I've always been a child of the moon Tara |
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jane_kiedis Junior Member
since 2006-02-04
Posts 38Philippines |
aww... Marge, ur work is amazing! kinda felt the spirit in there...hehe! cheers! c",) ------> Jane psychic spies from China tries to steal your mind's elation |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just smiling at your moon words M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyFriends~ The moon phases me ... poetically ... knowing that it also word-shines on you is my absolute delight~ I feel blessed with the aura of your friendships ... one and all~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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