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wanderingin Junior Member
since 2006-02-03
Posts 39 |
Had I the gift of words you do I think I'd write a book. I'd want the world to see a star And make the critics look. But maybe it is I, The greedy one at heart, Who longs to share your deepest thoughts And know you not in part. I long to see your precious face To hear your words so fine And here, at least, I find you, dear, In words of song and rhyme. The ebb and flow so familiar to me Of those days now long gone by. I've missed you, dad, and forgive me, please, If I steal away and cry. I know you have your busy life And I, in turn, have mine. But here is where I'll run to you, And cherish your every line. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Such a heartfelt entrance post.. I look forward to seeing more of your words. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Please check your email for a special Passions greeting~ In the midst of winter, |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh my, what a beautifully felt entrance into this place we call our 'Family of Friends'~ WELCOME ! Please enjoy the poetic offerings here and read to your heart's content~ I will certainly look forward to more pennings from you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome! I really like the way this is written and look forward to reading more from you!  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
welcome to passions  will be looking forward to reading more of you~My spirit will rise |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Welcome again. I enjoyed your poem and its range of emotions, and envy your feeling for your dad. - Owl |
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wanderingin Junior Member
since 2006-02-03
Posts 39 |
Thanks for the warm welcome! My dad used to write me beautiful things growing up, and all the way up until I left his home, honestly. Mom told me I could find his writings here... wonder if he'll figure out it's me. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
He'll know...depend on it...and some other dads (like this one) will wish. I've a son who has much more writing talent than I've ever dreamed of having, but I'm certain I'll never see him here....I treasure the occasional poem or vignette I've found, but he's too shy ever to show them to me, or to anyone else. Got me all wistful, you did -- I'm glad you wandered in! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions: Enjoy each day of the adventure...destiny always lights the path. TD |
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jane_kiedis Junior Member
since 2006-02-04
Posts 38Philippines |
i like ur poem...not bad for starters c",) cheers! psychic spies from China tries to steal your mind's elation |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Yes welcome to passions you will see we have alot of talented poets here hope you take time to read some of theres Great poem |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I too will welcome you and say that your poetry is refreshingly welcome too. Have fun with that Dad of yours, what a great thing to do. I will sure watch your progress in pulling his leg. |
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wanderingin Junior Member
since 2006-02-03
Posts 39 |
I never expected such a welcome! Thanks to all! My dad is far more talented that I, so don't get your hopes up. I just love reading his poetry... and now all of yours!!! I am really enjoying this, truly. What talented, deep,wonderful human beings you all must be! Really enjoying this all, thanks again. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Beautiful work. I am sure your dad will love reading your work. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I am having fun (no, fun is too light a word) - I am enjoying guessing who he is. I am sure, too, like Ratleader, that he will know it is he. However, I think he will be reticient about being too hopeful that he is the one, so PLEASE email him, if he doesn't make the first contact, and PLEASE re-kindle your relationship with him, for the sakes of more than just you and him. - Owl |
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wanderingin Junior Member
since 2006-02-03
Posts 39 |
Oh, if I gave the impression that our relationship is strained it was a false one indeed! We are still close, email, phone each other, etc. What I miss is that sweet poetry and prose of earlier years that he wrote me... guess he figured since there's another man in my life, I don't need it  Still haven't seen him pop in on my entries... we'll see... oh, and if he comments on one of my entries, I'll be the first to divulge the oh-so-intriguing secret! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
So *smiling* with anticipation are we~ Hoping he reads you REAL SOON !!! Thanks for the email exchange too...~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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